Yo! Just wanna say, absolutely love the game, I will probably sound real weird for this bit this is the first porn game that actually has me attatched to a character and actualy sad when i have to wait for an update.
Glad to hear it ;) and I am working on it! The next alpha is going to be released to my $20+ backers soon Not sure when it will eventually get to the public But you can always follow me on Patreon or Subscribestar for updates ;)
I'm curious if there are any plans for non-hazel paths. Just for variety. Like perhaps you end up in a relationship with one of the other characters primarily instead, or if the plan is all hazel, all the time. Don't get me wrong. Hazel is incredible, and I have no plans to cut him out, just curious about what the vision for the game is, only found it yesterday so I'm not exactly up to speed on the grand plan
Every character has their own path for dating JUST that character. And also you can have different combinations of characters in a relationship. I'm trying to make it very customizable, but we'll see if that kills me xD
Quite enjoyed my time with this, despite it being outside my usual interests. Trying to make sure ive seen everything. I'd like to see the scene gallery use the same system as the image gallery. Show a lock and a title that may give a clue as to where that scene happens. I don't mind replaying the game for new stuff, but when I get to the point where I hold skip down to get to the next choice hoping I'm going to find something new, I not only get a bit annoyed after a while (in general, this game isn't long enough yet to really bother me) but I also kinda feel bad for skipping content you spent time on, even if I've already read it. Titles would give me hints so maybe I go "oh if I say something else here I wonder if the scene I get changes" I could thrn make a note, or even an extra save at that choice. Also, I just like consistency, and seeing the 2 galleries use different rules just bothers my ocd lmao.
What with putting trans women characters into a game advertise as a femboy game? That sounds lowkey transphobic, like there's a trans man femboy in the game, and that's great because trans men can be femboys, but why the trans women characters lumped into the mix?
Okay so I've been thinking about this for like a whole day now. and I admit you have a point. The game is styled as a "Femboy visual novel" and yet one of the characters is a trans woman.
Transphobic? I don't think so. Of the 7 main love interests, 1 of them is a trans woman. Why? Because I was writing and she happened and was an interesting character so I pursued it.
She is never referred to as a femboy in the game and it is made clear she is a woman. Every trans person I've run this by has loved it.
Now, sure, I should maybe change the advertising. Even though on my Itch page I say
So I don't think I'm lying or obscuring the fact that trans women will be in the game. It's just that the majority of the LIs are femboys.
But, here is my genuine question: What do I do?
Like, 10% of the game is trans girl. The rest is femboy. It is the biggest part of the game. Do I say "A Femboy Visual Novel That Also Has a Trans Girl" like idk what to do here. I feel like it's not a big deal that the little tag line calls it a femboy game but the actual description says that there is more to it than that.
You aren't getting me, the game is basically a femboy hentai game, almost every option are femboys, except for the trans women, and that's my problem, why the other option of femboys are trans women? Lumping trans women with femboys is lowkey transphobic, as you're insinuating that they're "basically the same thing", when not at all, femboys are men while trans women are women
I am not lumping in trans woman with femboys and I never ever insinuated that they are basically the same thing. That's all you. I have never said any of that or even remotely implied it at all.
We haven't even fully dived into the trans woman's story yet. And she is only the first. More are coming.
Why a trans woman or women in a femboy game?
Idk dude, I just like feminine people and dicks so that's what my game is about.
Why are you so against me having variety in my game? Do you play like Dragon Age and get mad that you can ALSO be gay in this predominantly straight game?
This is such a weird critique cause I am basically having to respond to your projections about my game rather than what is actually happening.
Well, if they're cis women options in the game too, then I feel like it would be less transphobic, because right now trans women being lumped as an alternative to femboys is just weird
Look, the incredibly stupid comic that your lead artist made, making a bad faith argument using something derivated from AI editing.And would you look at that, he follows AI "artists", basically supporting them. Heck it's the same person that made the Fallout poster AI edit
Its my understanding that femboy can be an in between step for some trans women in their journey. For example nano-nano at first identified as a femboy but now identifies as a trans woman. Kinda like how bi-curious or heteroflexable can be a step to identifying as bi or pan (this one is from my experience). It also seems for some to be an identity on its own (like heteroflexable). Mind you this is just based on my observations as a bi cis-man. I would love the perspective on this from a femboy or trans woman.
While yes, some trans women were femboys before identifying as women, that still doesn't mean that femboys and trans women are the same thing or even remotely close to being the same thing
Not attempting to conflate the two, just curious if i had concluded correctly about some people passing thru one on the way to the other. I actually have not gotten to the point with the character in question. I understand the importance of gender identity and wouldent dream of delegitimizing any ones lived experience like that. No offense intended. Thank you for your input.
I mean, having actually played what's available for free, and being a transwoman myself, both the player character and the lead femboy are sensitive about trans people in a way that indicates the writer being familiar with the topic.
The currently only available scene with the transwoman in the game isn't the same dynamic as the other characters.
None of it strikes me as phobic or even misinformed, I can't really tell you not to find it distasteful if you do but I think it's disingenuous to imply that it comes from malice.
i am somewhat new to Itch and such, so i was just wondering how i download an update for a game i already had in my files since i really want to play the update i missed :P
English. I won't support other languages because the script is constantly changing and being edited. Once the game is done being written, I will look into translations. If I started translating now I would have to get it re-translated every build which would probably cost so much money to be done right.
The dialog in this game is so terrible. I had to turn it off half-way through because it started ranting about communism in a italian femboy restaurant.
I'm not gay but......Hazel And Jeze got me acting up😳😳😳🥵🥵🥵jokes aside doe character design/art style hella cute to me H scenes(got me feeling🥵)are crazy good and story is interesting all in all 10 outta 10 from me can't wait for more future updates
The art in this game is ok. The problematic parts, that made me quit after the first sex scenes, become evident right when you start. So, first things first, we are introduced to this female-presenting character called Hazel. Just to include the stupid "boymilk" meme, she literally commits a crime and CUMS into your coffee, an act that is implied to be taking place regularly in the Cafe. In any country of this planet, that would be a giant scandal, and her life would be ruined, should it ever came to light. Apparently, the MC is retroactively ok with this, but that does NOT make it okay, even in the slightest.
The sexual harrassment continues with Hazel literally ripping your boxers off without asking, but I suppose it's ok because she's conventionally attractive and hot.
Oh, speaking of "her"; this game, despite including a Trans character, and addressing things such as gender identity, at the very least ostensibly, and being aware that trap is a, I quote, "outdated term", could not be more offensive towards Trans-people and femboys alike. Hazel is the only example of this I can cite, due to not having fully played the game: She visibly reacts positively to being referred to as a Girl and avoids referring to herself as a boy. This strongly implies her being a transfem, rather than a boy, who would insist on their male gender identity. Neither the protag, nor the narration ever dispute this, referring to them with male pronouns and even call them as a "guy", just because they possess a penis. Oh, and also, the Cafe being called an "Estro-Cafe", and Hazel, the "Femboy" literally just looking like a girl with a Penis, no visibly boy-ish traits at all, really fails to capture the whole "Femboy" thing, and looks like just another damaging mischaracterization of Femboys and Feminine Men in general. The implication is that they're on Estrogen, which you most definetly should not take unless you actually want to transition. Thank you for romantizing a damaging trend.
Then, during Sex, she refers to herself as a, I quote "sissy", and the Protag calls her a "cumdump"; that could very well be interpreted as an insult, unless you really know it's their kink. In Hazels case, we don't know upfront. They literally just met, and are already fucking.
Let's continue with the Anal Sex. Has anyone working on this game ever done Anal actively or passively? If they did, they should be aware, that it's not even close to being as simple as spreading lube over your ass and hoping for the best. Anal takes preparation, cleaning yourself etc., so unless Hazel is always perpetually prepared, just in case yet another male customer comes in that she would like to sexually harass, this doesn't make sense - oh, wait, nevermind, she claims of it to be her FIRST TIME, just so the Protag (and the Player) can have the satisfaction of taking her virginity, and of course, the Sex that follows functions perfectly despite her lack of experience and they both romantically cum at the same time, just like in my amazing H-Doujins. After that they even have the gall to say how "different" it is from porn, because you got to clean up afterwards. Kudos for the writer(s) to think about this one for more than a single second.
Anyway, I suppose if you turn your brain off, it could be erotic, or something.
Who hurt you that you cry a about something that happens in a ero game thats drawn? pls consult your therapist and maybe get in touch with grass and friends... my god you are a Snowflake.
critizising a Game is one thing thats ok but you are just telling us everything that offends you and your little tiny world. Dude I saw Porns way worse in their phrasing and even my friends, who are trans, femboy etc. play that game saying "I wish someone would say/do that. Yes it is a little harsh here and there but in the end its a kink nothing more nothing less
The tags had no mention of degradation or discriminatory language, so it's fair to criticize the parts of the game that delve into such a direction. The fact that your trans friends have no problem with slurs doesn't mean that it's not an aspect that should be criticized when it isn't declared upfront. Yes, it's a porn game, but especially because of that it'd be nice if the game properly characterized trans girls and femboys as distinct groups of people that might generally like to be referred to with the fitting terms, instead of both groups being seemingly generalized as "looks female and has a cock, time to call them a boy and refer to them as a sissy", because when it is done that way, someone who is expecting proper inclusion of trans girls (as is declared in the tags) will be disappointed when there is no respectful inclusion to be seen. Criticizing flaws that detract from the enjoyment isn't "crying and being offended", it's applying standards to a game that doesn't properly match it's advertised tags and contents and instead treats the supposedly included tags as one and the same, and in an insulting way at that. If you're into degradation and femboys you will most surely enjoy the scenes, sure, but that isn't the only advertised genre you absolute gooner who can't even entertain the idea of constructive criticism to a product
I think the problem is that the original commenter, and maybe even you, haven't gotten to those characters yes. There are trans characters in the game. Hazel isn't one of them.
And I guess I'll tag that people talk dirty during sex? I honestly didn't think I'd have to tag that, but okay, I'll do that.
Yeah, Hazel is a dude. There are trans characters later. Hazel is a guy. A guy who likes to be feminine. He enjoys the player character's inability to be see him as a guy and rolls with it. This is addressed.
Yes, cumming in someone's coffee without their consent is bad. This is actually addressed in the game multiple times. It is not a good thing.
Hazel isn't a perfect person, no one is. He lies and goes along with things when he shouldn't. This is called a 'character flaw'. Hazel lies about a lot of things. Like being a virgin, which he can admit to the player later that he lied because it was hotter to say it.
Hazel calls himself a sissy during sex and the player rolls with it because it's clear that Hazel likes to be degraded a bit. It seems that people have taken umbrage with me not signposting that people like to dirty talk in a porn game, so I'll amend that.
Cafe Estro is a jokey name in a porn game. Please understand the genre you are engaging with. Also the name is a foreshadow for the manager who shows up later. Hazel isn't on estrogen. I believe I even talk about this in the game, but if not, I should.
Yes, I know anal sex doesn't quite work like that in real life. (I am a guy with a husband) But this is a porn game and if I were to portray anal sex realistically it wouldn't be a very fun game now would it? It's like watching a movie and asking why the characters aren't tired, or why they haven't gone to the bathroom, or where they get their ammo from, etc. Are they valid questions? Sure. But the answer is: It's a movie. You accept these things to suspend your disbelief to enjoy them. Like characters always being ready for anal sex, or cumming together romantically. It's a story.
This is a porn game. There are genre expectations that players of this genre are familiar with which is why I don't have a scene of Hazel douching prior to sex scenes.
I appreciate that you took so much time out of your day to play my game and engage with it that you decided to write this essay. But you seem to jump to a lot of conclusions and aren't willing to participate in the story being told. You want realism but don't understand that characters can lie.
If you want a 100% realistic porn game, you are never going to be truly satisfied.
I see, thank you for elaborating and the respectful reply. Yes, me not playing to the point where the problems I mentioned are actually addressed might have skewed my view of the entire game.
Isn't your lead artist a bigoted loser that loves and supports AI art, and defended that AI edit of the butt of an actress under the lie of "protecting against the sjw and their censorship"? Because if that's true then you're a massive loser
Bro the only loser here is you, if you're talking about the fallout comic like I think you are bro legit explained what it was about and never mentioned anything about the AI, yet you would know that if you put in an ounce of effort before spouting nonsense. Then again, you're using the term "bigoted" unironically which says a lot more about you than the panel says about the artist.
Also "protecting against the sjw and their censorship"? Wtf are you on about ☠️? The sentence, which we both know isn't a direct quote so this is purely something you wrote hence the quotations, makes no sense on a stand alone basis and even with context is still poorly written and makes no sense. The elaboration to the comic, if you could read And comprehend it, stated that it was a commentary on the desexualization and hence uglified art/characters in movies and games. Which is factual, look at how they massacred MJ from Spiderman 1 to 2, straight up Crimson-Chin ah look.
Silence idiot, and that fallout thing was based on a stupid AI edit where they altered the appearance of the main actress of the Fallout show just because her "ass wasn't fat enough", the comic is still idiotic and the artist follows and supports AI
I wouldn't care too much what the cum guzzling, chromosome deficient, living birth defect has to say. I explained it to you, yet your response was a simple, and I mean that in every meaning of the word, "um, ackually, it means what i said and you're just stupid 🤓 ☝️" head ahh argument. You, I'll refer to you as it from now on, want to be upset about whatever because it's a pathetic individual that should have died at birth and disposed of in the proper receptacle to later become semi useful as a homeless persons snack, assuming they have no standards and don't mistake your off brand Quasimodo-clone fetus as a fetid and diseased rodent, rotted and malformed. The description of which still holds up with you currently being built like a question mark, shrimp spine, Kyphosis spokesperson, who's posture is saggier than your mamas tits you still suck the dust out of.
bro, being bigoted and using ai art to make a joke is completely different, I'm not a supporter of ai art being just that, but what I am fine with is people using it purely for laughs or as a tool. I feel like that's an okay stance. its one many share, the only famous example that comes to mind is moist critikal but still.
So idk if its my game or this is a feature but on the first "scene" with hazel in the coffee shop bathroom, there was no animation for hazel. He just stared up at me and then when I hit the release option I saw a single picture of hazel and that was it.
Again, idk if its supposed to be like that since the words seemed to be describing things that were going on and it just made sense to have an actual animation.
This game... i didnt expect it to be so damn good like wow i really love this and the idea of poly makes me happy cuz dave surprised the crap outta me and robbie hell even jeze i want em all keep up the great work am sad now that i have to wait
I love this game alot,it's one of the nsfw dating gamesvthat really tugs your heart strings and i cant wait for more content in the future to see more Hazel
PS,I will do anything for Robbie,I love him so much,Finally a good ftm charater in a nsfw dating sim
Fun game, was really loving all the cute traps and whatnot, but kinda got whiplash being forced to accept Robbie unless you want the "bad" end. Could do with an option in the settings, either way, touching story.
I mean, if you're okay with a boy dressing up and acting like a girl, you should probably be okay with a trans boy doing the same thing.
Besides, if you were realistically trying to hook up with or get closer to someone who had a trans best friend and you were like "eh, actually I'm not cool with trans people" they'd drop you as fast as Hazel did.
You don't need to romantically or sexually pursue Robbie. All he is asking if for you to accept that he is a boy.
Because what else would happen? What else could I do in that scenario?
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Yo! Just wanna say, absolutely love the game, I will probably sound real weird for this bit this is the first porn game that actually has me attatched to a character and actualy sad when i have to wait for an update.
Keep up the good work! :)
Glad to see I'm doing my job well ;)
I genuinely play porn games for the plot.
More options to fuck dave pls (Also can you add like have sex with him but with no femboy outfit?)
Btw is there gonna be role swap like hazel on top and protagonist in the bottom?
Maaybe xD Dave is a side character, so he is not going to pop up all too much.
And yes.
YESSIRRRR
A sequel? This isn't even done yet xD
Are you sure you're not the femboy in the wed-
Also any plans for the icon? It's nothing big but would be a nice add-on
What
hello devs, i love your game and now I question my sexuality now
when will the next update released?
Glad to hear it ;)
and I am working on it!
The next alpha is going to be released to my $20+ backers soon
Not sure when it will eventually get to the public
But you can always follow me on Patreon or Subscribestar for updates ;)
Any new updates??
The next alpha is going to be released to my $20+ backers soon
Not sure when it will eventually get to the public
But you can always follow me on Patreon or Subscribestar for updates ;)
I'm curious if there are any plans for non-hazel paths. Just for variety. Like perhaps you end up in a relationship with one of the other characters primarily instead, or if the plan is all hazel, all the time. Don't get me wrong. Hazel is incredible, and I have no plans to cut him out, just curious about what the vision for the game is, only found it yesterday so I'm not exactly up to speed on the grand plan
Every character has their own path for dating JUST that character. And also you can have different combinations of characters in a relationship. I'm trying to make it very customizable, but we'll see if that kills me xD
Quite enjoyed my time with this, despite it being outside my usual interests. Trying to make sure ive seen everything. I'd like to see the scene gallery use the same system as the image gallery. Show a lock and a title that may give a clue as to where that scene happens. I don't mind replaying the game for new stuff, but when I get to the point where I hold skip down to get to the next choice hoping I'm going to find something new, I not only get a bit annoyed after a while (in general, this game isn't long enough yet to really bother me) but I also kinda feel bad for skipping content you spent time on, even if I've already read it. Titles would give me hints so maybe I go "oh if I say something else here I wonder if the scene I get changes" I could thrn make a note, or even an extra save at that choice. Also, I just like consistency, and seeing the 2 galleries use different rules just bothers my ocd lmao.
All that said, looking forward to more!
Yeah the lock is coming back and were revamping the gallery
no hints tho xD
Fair. Ill take what i can get
Will we get an option to choose a non polyamory relationship later?
Yeah, episode 5 is going to open with deciding what relationship you want with Hazel or Robbie or both or neither.
What with putting trans women characters into a game advertise as a femboy game? That sounds lowkey transphobic, like there's a trans man femboy in the game, and that's great because trans men can be femboys, but why the trans women characters lumped into the mix?
Okay so I've been thinking about this for like a whole day now.
and I admit you have a point. The game is styled as a "Femboy visual novel" and yet one of the characters is a trans woman.
Transphobic? I don't think so. Of the 7 main love interests, 1 of them is a trans woman. Why? Because I was writing and she happened and was an interesting character so I pursued it.
She is never referred to as a femboy in the game and it is made clear she is a woman. Every trans person I've run this by has loved it.
Now, sure, I should maybe change the advertising. Even though on my Itch page I say
So I don't think I'm lying or obscuring the fact that trans women will be in the game. It's just that the majority of the LIs are femboys.
But, here is my genuine question: What do I do?
Like, 10% of the game is trans girl. The rest is femboy. It is the biggest part of the game. Do I say "A Femboy Visual Novel That Also Has a Trans Girl" like idk what to do here. I feel like it's not a big deal that the little tag line calls it a femboy game but the actual description says that there is more to it than that.
But you tell me.
You aren't getting me, the game is basically a femboy hentai game, almost every option are femboys, except for the trans women, and that's my problem, why the other option of femboys are trans women? Lumping trans women with femboys is lowkey transphobic, as you're insinuating that they're "basically the same thing", when not at all, femboys are men while trans women are women
I am not lumping in trans woman with femboys and I never ever insinuated that they are basically the same thing. That's all you. I have never said any of that or even remotely implied it at all.
We haven't even fully dived into the trans woman's story yet. And she is only the first. More are coming.
Why a trans woman or women in a femboy game?
Idk dude, I just like feminine people and dicks so that's what my game is about.
Why are you so against me having variety in my game? Do you play like Dragon Age and get mad that you can ALSO be gay in this predominantly straight game?
This is such a weird critique cause I am basically having to respond to your projections about my game rather than what is actually happening.
Well, if they're cis women options in the game too, then I feel like it would be less transphobic, because right now trans women being lumped as an alternative to femboys is just weird
Look, the incredibly stupid comic that your lead artist made, making a bad faith argument using something derivated from AI editing.
And would you look at that, he follows AI "artists", basically supporting them. Heck it's the same person that made the Fallout poster AI edit
Its my understanding that femboy can be an in between step for some trans women in their journey. For example nano-nano at first identified as a femboy but now identifies as a trans woman. Kinda like how bi-curious or heteroflexable can be a step to identifying as bi or pan (this one is from my experience). It also seems for some to be an identity on its own (like heteroflexable). Mind you this is just based on my observations as a bi cis-man. I would love the perspective on this from a femboy or trans woman.
While yes, some trans women were femboys before identifying as women, that still doesn't mean that femboys and trans women are the same thing or even remotely close to being the same thing
Not attempting to conflate the two, just curious if i had concluded correctly about some people passing thru one on the way to the other. I actually have not gotten to the point with the character in question. I understand the importance of gender identity and wouldent dream of delegitimizing any ones lived experience like that. No offense intended. Thank you for your input.
I mean, having actually played what's available for free, and being a transwoman myself, both the player character and the lead femboy are sensitive about trans people in a way that indicates the writer being familiar with the topic.
The currently only available scene with the transwoman in the game isn't the same dynamic as the other characters.
None of it strikes me as phobic or even misinformed, I can't really tell you not to find it distasteful if you do but I think it's disingenuous to imply that it comes from malice.
Keep doing good. I am wait for more update.
Thank you! Working on it :D
Am gay
Hazel made me more gay
GOOD
I'm not gay, but I would if I was pc
Fellas, is it gay to like feminine looking people?
am I still straight after playing this? No. Was it worth it? Absolutely.
10/10 would become gay again.
I'm so happy I've made so many people gay. I'm really doing an important job.
Bug in v.0.10.5:
Just after the first Dave going out scene. When waking up, texting Hazel. The text by the player is invisible.
Thank you! We have that fixed for v0.11 ;)
Absolutely dying at the dialogue in this. Loving the evil dead references and was shocked at the My House reference 😭
I enjoy adding my niche interests ;)
Amazing work, didnt know i was into femboys until i found this game, suddenly i love boy's in skirts, does that make me gay? Yes.
Also i enjoyed quite a lot the interactions, they are funny and interesting. Fucking love this game man. wish i had a job to support its development
Hell yeah, added another to the cause :D
i am somewhat new to Itch and such, so i was just wondering how i download an update for a game i already had in my files since i really want to play the update i missed :P
Are you using the itch desktop app or just downloading the files?
tbf, i didnt know there was a desktop app, how do i get it?
i got it! keep up the good work btw, your game is easy S+ Tier! :3
please tell me which languages are implemented in the game?
English. I won't support other languages because the script is constantly changing and being edited. Once the game is done being written, I will look into translations. If I started translating now I would have to get it re-translated every build which would probably cost so much money to be done right.
Thanks
The dialog in this game is so terrible. I had to turn it off half-way through because it started ranting about communism in a italian femboy restaurant.
So you like communism? Because I literally made a joke about how communism doesn't work xD
Also, the 'communist rant' is like 5 lines or so and only said twice.
I'm stuck, I can't get this image, could someone give me a clue please
... did we just talk on Twitter?
Hell yeah!
i love this game... I just wanna make em happy.. i need more content
Oh you're gonna fucking get more content
Ah yes, a fellow MyHouse.Wad PowerPak video enjoyer~
Fuck yeees
Cant seem to enter the discord, is the limk outdated?
I'm not gay but......Hazel And Jeze got me acting up😳😳😳🥵🥵🥵jokes aside doe character design/art style hella cute to me H scenes(got me feeling🥵)are crazy good and story is interesting all in all 10 outta 10 from me can't wait for more future updates
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And its okay to like dudes in skirts <3
😂😅 well the irl ones I've seen are a wee bit disappointing but thx!!
Love this game. The character development is top tier. The writing made me feel things. The scenes are great. Cannot wait for future updates!
Thank you so much! :D
Yeah so, this game is actually so damn peak. PEAK!!!! I love it, character designs are great, super cute art style, and great story!
Thank you!!
Working on it <3
The art in this game is ok. The problematic parts, that made me quit after the first sex scenes, become evident right when you start. So, first things first, we are introduced to this female-presenting character called Hazel. Just to include the stupid "boymilk" meme, she literally commits a crime and CUMS into your coffee, an act that is implied to be taking place regularly in the Cafe. In any country of this planet, that would be a giant scandal, and her life would be ruined, should it ever came to light. Apparently, the MC is retroactively ok with this, but that does NOT make it okay, even in the slightest.
The sexual harrassment continues with Hazel literally ripping your boxers off without asking, but I suppose it's ok because she's conventionally attractive and hot.
Oh, speaking of "her"; this game, despite including a Trans character, and addressing things such as gender identity, at the very least ostensibly, and being aware that trap is a, I quote, "outdated term", could not be more offensive towards Trans-people and femboys alike. Hazel is the only example of this I can cite, due to not having fully played the game: She visibly reacts positively to being referred to as a Girl and avoids referring to herself as a boy. This strongly implies her being a transfem, rather than a boy, who would insist on their male gender identity. Neither the protag, nor the narration ever dispute this, referring to them with male pronouns and even call them as a "guy", just because they possess a penis. Oh, and also, the Cafe being called an "Estro-Cafe", and Hazel, the "Femboy" literally just looking like a girl with a Penis, no visibly boy-ish traits at all, really fails to capture the whole "Femboy" thing, and looks like just another damaging mischaracterization of Femboys and Feminine Men in general. The implication is that they're on Estrogen, which you most definetly should not take unless you actually want to transition. Thank you for romantizing a damaging trend.
Then, during Sex, she refers to herself as a, I quote "sissy", and the Protag calls her a "cumdump"; that could very well be interpreted as an insult, unless you really know it's their kink. In Hazels case, we don't know upfront. They literally just met, and are already fucking.
Let's continue with the Anal Sex. Has anyone working on this game ever done Anal actively or passively? If they did, they should be aware, that it's not even close to being as simple as spreading lube over your ass and hoping for the best. Anal takes preparation, cleaning yourself etc., so unless Hazel is always perpetually prepared, just in case yet another male customer comes in that she would like to sexually harass, this doesn't make sense - oh, wait, nevermind, she claims of it to be her FIRST TIME, just so the Protag (and the Player) can have the satisfaction of taking her virginity, and of course, the Sex that follows functions perfectly despite her lack of experience and they both romantically cum at the same time, just like in my amazing H-Doujins. After that they even have the gall to say how "different" it is from porn, because you got to clean up afterwards. Kudos for the writer(s) to think about this one for more than a single second.
Anyway, I suppose if you turn your brain off, it could be erotic, or something.
I liked it when they said bussy
What tf is blud yapping about? ☠️
And?
Who hurt you that you cry a about something that happens in a ero game thats drawn? pls consult your therapist and maybe get in touch with grass and friends... my god you are a Snowflake.
"Uhmmm it's literally a GAME why are you critizising it THOUGH??"
critizising a Game is one thing thats ok but you are just telling us everything that offends you and your little tiny world. Dude I saw Porns way worse in their phrasing and even my friends, who are trans, femboy etc. play that game saying "I wish someone would say/do that. Yes it is a little harsh here and there but in the end its a kink nothing more nothing less
The tags had no mention of degradation or discriminatory language, so it's fair to criticize the parts of the game that delve into such a direction. The fact that your trans friends have no problem with slurs doesn't mean that it's not an aspect that should be criticized when it isn't declared upfront. Yes, it's a porn game, but especially because of that it'd be nice if the game properly characterized trans girls and femboys as distinct groups of people that might generally like to be referred to with the fitting terms, instead of both groups being seemingly generalized as "looks female and has a cock, time to call them a boy and refer to them as a sissy", because when it is done that way, someone who is expecting proper inclusion of trans girls (as is declared in the tags) will be disappointed when there is no respectful inclusion to be seen. Criticizing flaws that detract from the enjoyment isn't "crying and being offended", it's applying standards to a game that doesn't properly match it's advertised tags and contents and instead treats the supposedly included tags as one and the same, and in an insulting way at that. If you're into degradation and femboys you will most surely enjoy the scenes, sure, but that isn't the only advertised genre you absolute gooner who can't even entertain the idea of constructive criticism to a product
I think the problem is that the original commenter, and maybe even you, haven't gotten to those characters yes. There are trans characters in the game. Hazel isn't one of them.
And I guess I'll tag that people talk dirty during sex? I honestly didn't think I'd have to tag that, but okay, I'll do that.
i dont remember seeing anyone ask the gooner for their opinion
L+ratio+who asked+L bozo
if you don't like the game don't play it L bozo
also, im literally a TRANS GIRL. and nothing about this is offensive in any way.
What you are is of no interest to me. I also literally stopped playing it after realizing I didn't like it and that it was pretty bad
Wow, well then.
Yeah, Hazel is a dude. There are trans characters later. Hazel is a guy. A guy who likes to be feminine. He enjoys the player character's inability to be see him as a guy and rolls with it. This is addressed.
Yes, cumming in someone's coffee without their consent is bad. This is actually addressed in the game multiple times. It is not a good thing.
Hazel isn't a perfect person, no one is. He lies and goes along with things when he shouldn't. This is called a 'character flaw'. Hazel lies about a lot of things. Like being a virgin, which he can admit to the player later that he lied because it was hotter to say it.
Hazel calls himself a sissy during sex and the player rolls with it because it's clear that Hazel likes to be degraded a bit. It seems that people have taken umbrage with me not signposting that people like to dirty talk in a porn game, so I'll amend that.
Cafe Estro is a jokey name in a porn game. Please understand the genre you are engaging with. Also the name is a foreshadow for the manager who shows up later. Hazel isn't on estrogen. I believe I even talk about this in the game, but if not, I should.
Yes, I know anal sex doesn't quite work like that in real life. (I am a guy with a husband) But this is a porn game and if I were to portray anal sex realistically it wouldn't be a very fun game now would it? It's like watching a movie and asking why the characters aren't tired, or why they haven't gone to the bathroom, or where they get their ammo from, etc. Are they valid questions? Sure. But the answer is: It's a movie. You accept these things to suspend your disbelief to enjoy them. Like characters always being ready for anal sex, or cumming together romantically. It's a story.
This is a porn game. There are genre expectations that players of this genre are familiar with which is why I don't have a scene of Hazel douching prior to sex scenes.
I appreciate that you took so much time out of your day to play my game and engage with it that you decided to write this essay. But you seem to jump to a lot of conclusions and aren't willing to participate in the story being told. You want realism but don't understand that characters can lie.
If you want a 100% realistic porn game, you are never going to be truly satisfied.
I see, thank you for elaborating and the respectful reply. Yes, me not playing to the point where the problems I mentioned are actually addressed might have skewed my view of the entire game.
Isn't your lead artist a bigoted loser that loves and supports AI art, and defended that AI edit of the butt of an actress under the lie of "protecting against the sjw and their censorship"? Because if that's true then you're a massive loser
Bro the only loser here is you, if you're talking about the fallout comic like I think you are bro legit explained what it was about and never mentioned anything about the AI, yet you would know that if you put in an ounce of effort before spouting nonsense. Then again, you're using the term "bigoted" unironically which says a lot more about you than the panel says about the artist.
Also "protecting against the sjw and their censorship"? Wtf are you on about ☠️? The sentence, which we both know isn't a direct quote so this is purely something you wrote hence the quotations, makes no sense on a stand alone basis and even with context is still poorly written and makes no sense. The elaboration to the comic, if you could read And comprehend it, stated that it was a commentary on the desexualization and hence uglified art/characters in movies and games. Which is factual, look at how they massacred MJ from Spiderman 1 to 2, straight up Crimson-Chin ah look.
Tldr: You're goofy bruh.
Silence idiot, and that fallout thing was based on a stupid AI edit where they altered the appearance of the main actress of the Fallout show just because her "ass wasn't fat enough", the comic is still idiotic and the artist follows and supports AI
Yeah, Kokman didn't realize the outcry was about it being AI. I know because I actually spoke to him. He also doesn't support AI and neither do I.
I wouldn't care too much what the cum guzzling, chromosome deficient, living birth defect has to say. I explained it to you, yet your response was a simple, and I mean that in every meaning of the word, "um, ackually, it means what i said and you're just stupid 🤓 ☝️" head ahh argument. You, I'll refer to you as it from now on, want to be upset about whatever because it's a pathetic individual that should have died at birth and disposed of in the proper receptacle to later become semi useful as a homeless persons snack, assuming they have no standards and don't mistake your off brand Quasimodo-clone fetus as a fetid and diseased rodent, rotted and malformed. The description of which still holds up with you currently being built like a question mark, shrimp spine, Kyphosis spokesperson, who's posture is saggier than your mamas tits you still suck the dust out of.
bro, being bigoted and using ai art to make a joke is completely different, I'm not a supporter of ai art being just that, but what I am fine with is people using it purely for laughs or as a tool. I feel like that's an okay stance. its one many share, the only famous example that comes to mind is moist critikal but still.
What with the lumping trans women with femboys in a game like they were the same thing? That sounds slightly transphobic I have to say
you sure like leaving these walls of yappery in a lot of itch.io games
Is my phone that bad? Im playing on a M12 and the fps suddenly drops a lot when playing a H-Scene. Might buy a new one...
With the size of the game and the amount of things in it, it is starting to not work on some phones. We are working on a phone specific version.
Cant enter discord :(
So idk if its my game or this is a feature but on the first "scene" with hazel in the coffee shop bathroom, there was no animation for hazel. He just stared up at me and then when I hit the release option I saw a single picture of hazel and that was it.
Again, idk if its supposed to be like that since the words seemed to be describing things that were going on and it just made sense to have an actual animation.
Other then that I really like the game so far👍
There is definitely an animation there
are you on mobile?
no im on a pc
That is really strange. I apologize, I'm not sure what is causing that.
is polyamory an option or a "requirement" in this game?
not that I'd stop playing, but it's not quite clear to me
Everything is an option
thanks for answering!
great game btw
Can someone help me with downloading the game stop by step on to my phone.
This game... i didnt expect it to be so damn good like wow i really love this and the idea of poly makes me happy cuz dave surprised the crap outta me and robbie hell even jeze i want em all keep up the great work am sad now that i have to wait
Thanks for playing! <3
I love this game alot,it's one of the nsfw dating gamesvthat really tugs your heart strings and i cant wait for more content in the future to see more Hazel
PS,I will do anything for Robbie,I love him so much,Finally a good ftm charater in a nsfw dating sim
Hell yeah! Im so happy you like it, and Robbie 😁 i love him
Fun game, was really loving all the cute traps and whatnot, but kinda got whiplash being forced to accept Robbie unless you want the "bad" end. Could do with an option in the settings, either way, touching story.
I mean, if you're okay with a boy dressing up and acting like a girl, you should probably be okay with a trans boy doing the same thing.
Besides, if you were realistically trying to hook up with or get closer to someone who had a trans best friend and you were like "eh, actually I'm not cool with trans people" they'd drop you as fast as Hazel did.
You don't need to romantically or sexually pursue Robbie. All he is asking if for you to accept that he is a boy.
Because what else would happen? What else could I do in that scenario?
Is there a way to get a black background behind the text? I'm finding it really hard to read anything
Ill add that in the next update <3
I created an account just to say that this game is really cool.
I agree with other reviews, I want more dialogues. They are genuinely insane. I thought I'd only see some femboy action, instead I got much more.
Thank you for this fantastic game :)
Keep up the good work.
P.S: The doom.wad dialogue got me straight up rolling on the floor.
Thank you so much!
there is a lot more to come ;)