am i? Personally, I've never looked at any guy romantically, I just think the characters in this game did a good job looking feminine enough to draw me in xD, Love your work.
Ran into a glitch where after talking with Jeze and offering to help him, then choosing to have sex with him in the kitchen, I got looped back to the cheating sequence from the previous night. Jeze said lines like "Perfect thing for a newly single man" and "I'll help you forget about your ex" and then I got a game over. But doing it unlocked the replay of the kitchen scene, which had appropriate dialogue and led back to them talking in the closed restaurant.
Out of curiosity, did you restart the game or did you continue a save from a previous build? Because if you did the latter, that is the reason why you got the cheating dialogue. I added a new variable at the end of episode 2 so that when you do Jeze's scene later, you don't get the cheating stuff.
Hey, i loved your game, the artwork and animations are great. I would love to help with translation if you'd like to, i would do it for free. I can give you my discord ID if you want to
I really enjoy the game so far! Both Hazel and Jeze are amazingly cute with great personalities! I was wondering though (and I totally understand if it would be too much of a pain to do) could we have the option to skip the rimming scenes, I'm not judging anyone who's into it but it's really not my thing. Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing the story continue, keep up the good work!
Fair enough! I don't have a ton of cash but I can afford to send a few bucks your way now. Would $5 be enough to encourage you to consider adding skipable rimming or do I need to go a little higher?
As in, if you are having sexual intercourse where you are penetrating someone, the kind thing to do is to pleasure them and the hole you are about to be fucking.
Before I fuck a girl, I eat her pussy. Before I fuck a boy, I eat his ass.
It's just common courtesy. You gotta give.
(also if you hate it, just click past, it will happen again and again and again and I don't want to write a protag who doesn't eat)
I wouldn't expect you to change that, I was requesting an auto skip not for you to not write and animate those bits. That would be a frankly insane thing to ask for no matter how much I could donate. I absolutelydon't mind eating pussy, or even giving a bj. To clear I'd never judge someone for enjoying rimming (lord knows I'm into objectively much weirder stuff) it's just very much not for me.
Never Give Up: You must ask Jeze "Wanted to talk to you" before going on the date with Hazel, or going back to your hotel. Then you must day " I'm sorry," and the photo will be unlocked after finishing the dialog with Jeze.
Jeze Prework Out: you must have denied Jeze when going out on the first date with hazel. Then later you must say "Wanted to take you up on your offer." when Jeze is opening the shop before your date with Hazel.
Hazel Vs The Evil Dead: Say your favorite Evil Dead movie is "Bloody Muscle Body Builder in Hell"; after some dialog you will unlock the picture.
As for the J&H share a treat I'm still working that one out
the one on the right is dependent on when you say, "I wanted to talk to you" or "I wanted to take you on your offer" I dont remember which one it is but you should try whichever you didnt do, and the one on the left is the only one i dont have.
>No yaoi/BL tag >"You are a traveling businessman"
Once again, I am denied the opportunity to play as the femboy, transgirl, & transboy-loving woman I am after being given a glimpse of false hope at the lack of a yaoi/BL Tag...
Oh, sorry. I worded my statement ambiguously. I mean that I don't get to play as a female PC who is romancing a femboy
IRL, I'm a woman who loves femboys, but every "romance the femboy" game I can find has a mandatory male protagonist (yet for some reason doesn't label it as a BL/yaoi game, thus getting my hopes up and dashing them).
Yeah, I definitely can't deny that "femboy x woman" is pretty niche. And as someone LGBT herself, the last thing I'd want is to try and make people think women are trying to het-ify a traditionally gay genre.
Cheating on Hazel to get the other scenes made me SO SAD! The music, general wording, EVERYTHING made me feel absolutely terrible about doing it. What a great game
So I dont technically sell the game through Itch. That was a donation you made since all my stuff on Itch is free. You probably need to contact Itch support to get a refund.
I'm sorry the game didn't work on your preferred device.
you had it advertised that it works on the device so I gave the money to support you for your work. Unfortunately the game does not work on the advertised plat form. It's disappointing I was excited to play the game.
And I have given you multiple avenues to help alleviate the issue. Again, my Discord server is full of people who have the game on mobile and can assist you.
I honestly thought this game was amazing, it had really good dialogue and the way you connect with hazel is extremely human. The writing was really great, you did a good job of making the dialogue natural and I loved the evil dead things in the game. I really hope to see whats to come in future updates of the game and I hope you further continue this game or continue writing in general.
BUT, if you're going to have a long exposition on your VN, it needs to be more interesting than a businessman awkwardly flirting in a coffee shop for unironically 100+ lines of dialogue. The game is good but the start made me not want to play it at first. It's so drawn out, but doesn't really attempt to make any shots towards actual sexual tension. It's flirtatiousness for the sake of the writer, not the story.
Also, the line where MC says (something along the lines of) "did my dick just twitch at a guy" feels really out of place and somewhat out of touch in a game that explicitly mentions trans women in the description, ESPECIALLY when we have no idea if the person behind the counter is a femboy or a trans woman. There's better ways to clarify this regardless of the answer. You're better off just writing something like "wow that was hot" instead of implying that the player who just downloaded a porn game about femboys didn't know they were attracted to femboys.
Overall, adorable art style, good game after the intro, but it has an intro that frankly desperately needs to be compressed and rewritten.
Exactly, like, if you watch hazel masturbating and then drinking the coffee anyways, after the bathroom scene it says something about "and that's how you discovered the magical world of femboys* when the dialogues before that literally states that the mc fucked others femboys lmao 😂
IDK if this is a common issue with Renpy, an error with my install, or just my computer acting up, but when I tried to run this the bottom half of the background image was shifted to the right. And it seems to be only affecting this game. Is there a possible way to fix this, as it's pretty distracting and makes it hard to enjoy this wonderful experience you've made.
the amount of additional writing/coding/animating involved in adding even 1 new gender identity/genitalia would be so massive that I honestly can't conceivably do it at my level
Besides, as a cis guy, I'm not sure that's my story to tell
This was so cute! I really love the effort you're putting in to display more of a healthy relationship rather than a pornified, rose-tinted version of reality. The dialogue is snarky and clever, and I enjoy it when you call out tropes and toy with the fourth wall. I'll definitely be playing future updates.
omg i really love this game and im so fucking excited for Future updates <3 (but i feel like i should mention that you missed a small detail on the bridget image, the line across the mark on her forhead. its what changes it from the male mark to the transgender mark which its supposed to be in strive)
Someone please tell me how I get the last scene in the replay gallary 😭😭 ive been doing everything my little idiot brain can think of and I cant figure it out
This is my part time job, hoping on full time. This game is how I can afford rent.
If suddenly everyone dumped this game I'd listen to the reasons why, try to fix it, and if I can't fix it or if everyone just dumps it forever, I'd stop development.
so played version 0.8 yesterday and can say, its def just as nice as before, bit dissapointed, well very dissapointed that we got robbed of the jeze scene but very very much eagerly looking forward to that in the next update~ cant have enugh of "everyones favorite waiter" afterall xd
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okay.. I've never been attracted to guys and I'm into girls for real, but- does this count? I'm questioning myself, help
Yeah you gay ❤️
am i? Personally, I've never looked at any guy romantically, I just think the characters in this game did a good job looking feminine enough to draw me in xD, Love your work.
No you're not gay xD Women with dicks are still women. Try to watch only guy things and you'll see
Yeah I'm not into guys. But femboys that look very feminine are something else.
This game is making me embrace the love for femboys now.
Goooood
i'm a girl but is it bad i'm kinda into this stuff
No! Not at all!
no cause i'm born a cis girl and i'm into fem people with dicks
Hi, I'm a femboy OwO
👀
also, question:
will there ever be another version of this but with a fem player character?
that would require such a massive rewrite and rework of all lewd scenes that it would just be its own game.
And as a cis guy, not sure if it's my game to make.
totally understandable! sorry for the weird question
not really, enjoy what you like the best :3
theres nothing wrong with being a girl thats likes dicks lmao, thats the most normal thing possible regardless of the specifics
Which is the code
Hazel literally tells you
Sorry and tell me later
You're hitting all my bisexual triggers. How dare you XD
I wish I could say I was sorry.
Ran into a glitch where after talking with Jeze and offering to help him, then choosing to have sex with him in the kitchen, I got looped back to the cheating sequence from the previous night. Jeze said lines like "Perfect thing for a newly single man" and "I'll help you forget about your ex" and then I got a game over. But doing it unlocked the replay of the kitchen scene, which had appropriate dialogue and led back to them talking in the closed restaurant.
Out of curiosity, did you restart the game or did you continue a save from a previous build? Because if you did the latter, that is the reason why you got the cheating dialogue. I added a new variable at the end of episode 2 so that when you do Jeze's scene later, you don't get the cheating stuff.
I did continue a save from a previous build, that must have been it.
i did the route where you confront hazel about the latte, and when the owner of the restaurant came, there were 2 hazels
?? Weird, okay xD I'll look into it
Hey, i loved your game, the artwork and animations are great. I would love to help with translation if you'd like to, i would do it for free. I can give you my discord ID if you want to
(i mean spanish translation)
Appreciate the interest, but I'm not doing translations until the game is finished and I am not messing with the writing anymore.
Can you no longer get the scene for picking the right Evil Dead movie?
That scene was a sneak peek at the larger Evil Dead date that now happens.
Oh cool. Still missing a scene then and not sure what to do. Thanks
NO I DONT WANT TO DOWNLOAD IT I JUST WANT TO PLAY IT HERE
Skill issue.
I'm straight asf but this game got me brick up,,,love the artwork btw
Thanks bro! Can't wait till you come out of the closet <3
😂😂😂
I really enjoy the game so far! Both Hazel and Jeze are amazingly cute with great personalities! I was wondering though (and I totally understand if it would be too much of a pain to do) could we have the option to skip the rimming scenes, I'm not judging anyone who's into it but it's really not my thing. Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing the story continue, keep up the good work!
Fair enough! I don't have a ton of cash but I can afford to send a few bucks your way now. Would $5 be enough to encourage you to consider adding skipable rimming or do I need to go a little higher?
As in, if you are having sexual intercourse where you are penetrating someone, the kind thing to do is to pleasure them and the hole you are about to be fucking.
Before I fuck a girl, I eat her pussy.
Before I fuck a boy, I eat his ass.
It's just common courtesy. You gotta give.
(also if you hate it, just click past, it will happen again and again and again and I don't want to write a protag who doesn't eat)
I wouldn't expect you to change that, I was requesting an auto skip not for you to not write and animate those bits. That would be a frankly insane thing to ask for no matter how much I could donate. I absolutely don't mind eating pussy, or even giving a bj. To clear I'd never judge someone for enjoying rimming (lord knows I'm into objectively much weirder stuff) it's just very much not for me.
there is, press "ctrl" for like 2 secs
is the game gonna stop getting updates at version 1.0?
We are so so far from 1.0
thank god, i thought it was just gonna go from v0.9 to v1.0 lol
Any cheats?
You can cheat on Hazel if you want
i dont think that was what he means… but is fair
Does anyone know how to get this gallery image?
I do
XD of course you do
Best hentai game i ever played! 10/10, keep working dude! Good luck!
Thank you!
I downloaded the v0.9 but the game ends where isaac goes to the plane.
Am I doing something wrong?
no you just need to wait till v1.0 comes out to continue the story line
I played a week ago and game ends where isaac goes to the plane.I thought v0.8 ends there. I am confused.You sure v0.9 ends there.
as per the changelog
The new content is only accessed before the episode ends as it is an option to go see Jeze before the movie.
howd you get hazels cream and share a treat 2
to get hazels cream i think you need to pick the other two options besides the hazelnut latte
Hey hopes this helps:
Never Give Up: You must ask Jeze "Wanted to talk to you" before going on the date with Hazel, or going back to your hotel. Then you must day " I'm sorry," and the photo will be unlocked after finishing the dialog with Jeze.
Jeze Prework Out: you must have denied Jeze when going out on the first date with hazel. Then later you must say "Wanted to take you up on your offer." when Jeze is opening the shop before your date with Hazel.
Hazel Vs The Evil Dead: Say your favorite Evil Dead movie is "Bloody Muscle Body Builder in Hell"; after some dialog you will unlock the picture.
As for the J&H share a treat I'm still working that one out
Hope this helps <3
It gave me j&h share 2 instead of pre workout
Does anybody know how to get the 5th replay scene?
Hey guys, how do you get these scenes here?
the one on the right is dependent on when you say, "I wanted to talk to you" or "I wanted to take you on your offer" I dont remember which one it is but you should try whichever you didnt do, and the one on the left is the only one i dont have.
You cheater * judges intensely *
0.9 free when?
I just woke up lmao
4 hours after you posted this
What does this mean lmao
Think he meant to say that to JohnVow
>No yaoi/BL tag
>"You are a traveling businessman"
Once again, I am denied the opportunity to play as the femboy, transgirl, & transboy-loving woman I am after being given a glimpse of false hope at the lack of a yaoi/BL Tag...
Most femboy games have you play as the femboy.
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Oh, sorry. I worded my statement ambiguously. I mean that I don't get to play as a female PC who is romancing a femboy
IRL, I'm a woman who loves femboys, but every "romance the femboy" game I can find has a mandatory male protagonist (yet for some reason doesn't label it as a BL/yaoi game, thus getting my hopes up and dashing them).
Ahh, I see.
yeah that is definitely a niche in a niche.
I hope someone comes along and caters to it, or you do what I did and learn to make the game you wanna play ;)
Yeah, I definitely can't deny that "femboy x woman" is pretty niche. And as someone LGBT herself, the last thing I'd want is to try and make people think women are trying to het-ify a traditionally gay genre.
Cheating on Hazel to get the other scenes made me SO SAD! The music, general wording, EVERYTHING made me feel absolutely terrible about doing it. What a great game
Ik ts hurts i didnt want to do it, it makes me feel like a monster
I have tried several ways to play it on my Android phone and it will not work unfortunately i would like to request a refund.
I'm not good at troubleshooting phone stuff but im sure someone here or on my discord can help you out.
And as for a refund, did you pay for the game here or on Patreon?
I paid for the game through here.
So I dont technically sell the game through Itch. That was a donation you made since all my stuff on Itch is free. You probably need to contact Itch support to get a refund.
I'm sorry the game didn't work on your preferred device.
you had it advertised that it works on the device so I gave the money to support you for your work. Unfortunately the game does not work on the advertised plat form. It's disappointing I was excited to play the game.
It works on my Android phone I just think your phone is shitty tbh
And I have given you multiple avenues to help alleviate the issue.
Again, my Discord server is full of people who have the game on mobile and can assist you.
I paid for the game and it will not download or let me play it.
Free 0.9 when?
This Thursday as the announcement said
so get ready and be prepared to download it the same day
I honestly thought this game was amazing, it had really good dialogue and the way you connect with hazel is extremely human. The writing was really great, you did a good job of making the dialogue natural and I loved the evil dead things in the game. I really hope to see whats to come in future updates of the game and I hope you further continue this game or continue writing in general.
Art style is adorable. Love it
BUT, if you're going to have a long exposition on your VN, it needs to be more interesting than a businessman awkwardly flirting in a coffee shop for unironically 100+ lines of dialogue. The game is good but the start made me not want to play it at first. It's so drawn out, but doesn't really attempt to make any shots towards actual sexual tension. It's flirtatiousness for the sake of the writer, not the story.
Also, the line where MC says (something along the lines of) "did my dick just twitch at a guy" feels really out of place and somewhat out of touch in a game that explicitly mentions trans women in the description, ESPECIALLY when we have no idea if the person behind the counter is a femboy or a trans woman. There's better ways to clarify this regardless of the answer. You're better off just writing something like "wow that was hot" instead of implying that the player who just downloaded a porn game about femboys didn't know they were attracted to femboys.
Overall, adorable art style, good game after the intro, but it has an intro that frankly desperately needs to be compressed and rewritten.
Exactly, like, if you watch hazel masturbating and then drinking the coffee anyways, after the bathroom scene it says something about "and that's how you discovered the magical world of femboys* when the dialogues before that literally states that the mc fucked others femboys lmao 😂
Game still good tho
HAPPY NEW YEEAAAR RADLORD AND GOOD LUCK IN THE FUTURE!!! ✨✨⭐❤️❤️❤️🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
IDK if this is a common issue with Renpy, an error with my install, or just my computer acting up, but when I tried to run this the bottom half of the background image was shifted to the right. And it seems to be only affecting this game. Is there a possible way to fix this, as it's pretty distracting and makes it hard to enjoy this wonderful experience you've made.
try this out :) https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/display_problems.html
Are there any plans on being able to play as a female character or even a trans woman yourself?
I'd love to play this as a trans woman, being one myself
I'd gladly support this if that was an option
the amount of additional writing/coding/animating involved in adding even 1 new gender identity/genitalia would be so massive that I honestly can't conceivably do it at my level
Besides, as a cis guy, I'm not sure that's my story to tell
This was so cute! I really love the effort you're putting in to display more of a healthy relationship rather than a pornified, rose-tinted version of reality. The dialogue is snarky and clever, and I enjoy it when you call out tropes and toy with the fourth wall. I'll definitely be playing future updates.
omg i really love this game and im so fucking excited for Future updates <3 (but i feel like i should mention that you missed a small detail on the bridget image, the line across the mark on her forhead. its what changes it from the male mark to the transgender mark which its supposed to be in strive)
Someone please tell me how I get the last scene in the replay gallary 😭😭 ive been doing everything my little idiot brain can think of and I cant figure it out
I like the game but I don't know how to unlock the full gallery
Came for a quick nut. Left with me messaging my boyfriend about watching evil dead.
That's an odd question but I'll tackle it.
This is my part time job, hoping on full time. This game is how I can afford rent.
If suddenly everyone dumped this game I'd listen to the reasons why, try to fix it, and if I can't fix it or if everyone just dumps it forever, I'd stop development.
😭 nuuu!!! remove the cheating
You can just not cheat.
but they all so hawt
so played version 0.8 yesterday and can say, its def just as nice as before, bit dissapointed, well very dissapointed that we got robbed of the jeze scene but very very much eagerly looking forward to that in the next update~ cant have enugh of "everyones favorite waiter" afterall xd
i should watch evil dead